Analysis of Haiku (56-60)



56
penny for your thoughts
hot microphones are listening,
prison for your thoughts

57
wanness with nature,
conserved electricity;
the brutal lumens

58
something to say, the
verbose Benedictine breaks
his vow of silence

59
staring at a screen
practicing to disappear,
the aimless scroller

60
hibernating bug
under tree-bark's shingle roof,
icicle ice picks


Scheme ABXB ACXB AXXX AXXC AXXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Etheree  (20%)
Quatrain  (20%)
Metre 1 10111 1101100 10111 1 1110 010100 0101 1 10110 10101 11110 1 10101 100101 0101 1 11 1011101 10011
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 407
Words 112
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 59
Words per stanza (avg) 11
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Written on 2023

Submitted by James_Kirkpatrick on December 16, 2023

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