Analysis of In Your Silence



In Your Silence

In your silence I adore you
With my eyes you can feel my heart
And all its secrets and affections
Paint in quiet vibrant colors
The moment your presence
Strikes a lightning bolt within me
Your body rushes my blood inside
Right where you are becomes
My home of meaning and living
You are the pulsating path
Alight with laughter
Awash in your gaze and smile.

In your silence I come alive
Around you my body and mind
Awaken with your attention
And everything you say
Creates beautiful music
Because it’s all you
Your thoughts and feelings
Flowing through me
Expanding my aperture
And deepening my capacity
To care about you
Breathing who you are.

Is it any wonder at all I love
How the thought of you
Inspires passion and excitement
In my mundane existence
To bend where I am still
To lend a hand where help
Requires kind action
Or listening a gentle audience?
Yes, it’s all because of you
The way you create
Nouvelle raison de vivre
Mon cher Je t'aime!

Copyright © 2023 Charles Edward York
No part of this poem may be used or reproduced, stored in a retrieval system, or transmitted in any way or form or by any means electronic, mechanical, recording, or otherwise without the written permission of the author.*


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Poetic Form
Metre 0110 01101011 11111111 011100010 10101010 010110 10101011 110101101 111101 11110010 110101 01110 0101101 01101101 01111001 01011010 01011 0110010 01111 11010 1011 0101100 010010100 11011 10111 1110101111 10111 01100010 0101010 111111 110111 010110 1100010100 1110111 01101 11011 11111 101101 111110111101100010101010010111111010100100010110010100101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,235
Words 230
Sentences 6
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 12, 12, 12, 2
Lines Amount 39
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 198
Words per stanza (avg) 44

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How a woman’s quiet presence inspires love

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Written on December 14, 2023

Submitted by charlesedwardyork on December 14, 2023

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Charles Edward York

Charles Edward York is an author and poet activist living in Plano, Texas. He’s written over 1400 poems and published 17 books of poetry. Born in Vietnam and raised a citizen in Dallas, Texas, he writes poems that include the subjects of love and relationships, nature, social justice, including police violence against African-Americans and minorities, astronomy and others. more…

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