Analysis of The devil spoke (warning not for the squemish)



I am a dark angel said the women to the devil.
He said yes be unfaithful then.
She said i'll do my own work.
He said you are an unforgiving humming rotting burnt torn bursting dank flesh puke covered dark energy horny quitting... mother fucker to her in practice of the worst horror movie ever brought to her doorstep in knocks of 6..
She said I'll murder you and destroy the whole thing before I ever make a film like that I'm not as innocent as you think I am.
He said just so you know I'm a God who can't die so you'll see that thought for an eternity and more on fresh repeat whether you make it or not.
She said I'll call it dank death then.
He said we're angel legion too and we're not afraid of you or your Archangels and their dragons.
She said then be afraid of yourselves who are less than me.
He said unthank you for getting that off your chest with me.
She said I did it for me.
He said your very unwelcome.
She said well I love my ego and transmute it to light.
He said pussy and fought her guides back.
She said no fucking way.
His friend came all over her face and the sex shop.
She thought could it get any more perverted.
He thought no.
Then she got dressed and fed her now suckling child who had been watching and listening to the whole thing.
He ran off into the night laughing about love at first sight.
She came thinking about something beautiful she would make on cartoon network that night and locked her shop up.
He became a serial killer and his first victim was...


Scheme ABCDEFBGHHHIJKLMNOPJQR
Poetic Form
Metre 11011010101010 11110101 1111111 1111100101010111011110110010101010100101011010101101011 111101001011011101011111110011111 111111101111111111101000111011011111 11111111 11110101011011111100110 11110110111111 1111110111111 1111111 11110010 1111111001111 111001011 111101 111110010011 11111101010 111 111101011011111001001011 111010110011111 1110011010011110111101011 10101010011101
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,498
Words 312
Sentences 24
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 22
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 53
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,163
Words per stanza (avg) 291

About this poem

A flesh covering is a devine body. Your choice. Your free will. Your illusion. Your freedom. Your clostrophobia.

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Written on November 25, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on November 25, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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