Analysis of Light in the Eyes



Radiant and bright, like brown tourmaline,
Were those eyes that glistened like gems in light,
And could brighten a room even at night,
With a friendly look, gentle and serene.

By peering into them it could be seen,
A kind innocence left untouched by blight,
Which was always such a marvelous sight,
Like windows into a soul pure and clean.

But something changed, and I do not know why,
Like something suddenly darkened inside;
As an eclipse blackens the daytime sky,
A gloom came and caused the light to subside;
And all I could give was a mournful sigh,
Seeing that the child had not grown but died.


Scheme ABBA ABBA CDCDCD
Poetic Form
Metre 100011110 0111101101 0110011011 1010110001 1100111111 0110010111 111101001 1100101101 1101011111 1101001001 110110011 0110101101 0111110101 1010111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 603
Words 123
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 6
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 159
Words per stanza (avg) 36
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Written on November 18, 2023

Submitted by RosarioS on November 18, 2023

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