Analysis of Journey through the River of Ordinary Time



"Some days it seems like the weight of the world
Drags my soul to new lows, crushing my heart in its grip
Those days I walk under clouds, raindrops my tears
Joy feels like a distant dream beyond my reach

Other days, my spirit soars light as a bird
Skimming the blue sky, winds of delight lift me high
Laughter bubbles up from hidden springs within
Grace fills each breath, gratitude in every heartbeat  

Most days, life flows steady as a river between
Neither weighed down by sorrow, nor dancing in delight
Just calm currents bearing me on, come what may
The ebb and flow of ordinary time passing  

But life’s rhythm cannot be tamed or controlled
Stormy skies and bright dawns both will have their day
To embrace each moment as a precious gift
Is to find meaning on the highs and lows of each day

I cannot hoard the joys, nor block out the pain
Must welcome times of light and shadow the same
Bearing the darkness with hope, holding the light with care
Finding wisdom in all seasons life brings to share

The key is keeping my eyes on each step ahead
Not grieving goodbyes, nor grasping fleeting delight
But opening my hands, my heart to receive each instant
The bad with the good, all deserving my full presence

Life offers no guarantees, no permanent bliss
Pain and problems will come, that’s for sure
But so will joy, so will beauty, if I open my eyes to see
Grace abounds in both sorrow and laughter equally

Some days my heart feels pierced, my tears flow free
Other days, I’m beaming like the sun, vitality overflowing
Most days I’m just living, steady, in the flow
Through it all, I’m learning to fully embrace the mystery

Of this precious life, ups and downs and all
The mosaic of moments that make up my days
Darkness and light woven into one tapestry
Each experience a gift deserving my loving gaze"

The poem is part of a full version found in the book “Homo Sapiens” Part Part I - XVIII, written by Mawphniang Napoleon. This book is part of the popular “Homo Sapiens” book series, which can be purchased online at various online bookstores, such as Amazon. The book is available for purchase for those who are interested in reading the complete version of the poem. Remember to get all the books from the “Homo Sapiens” series, as well as other books by the same author.   So, don’t hesitate and get a copy today from one of the many online bookstores.   Khublei Shihajar Nguh,  (Dhanewad  )(Thank you )


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 2,471
Words 466
Sentences 6
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 52
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 191
Words per stanza (avg) 44

About this poem

In this poignant reflection, the poet unveils the intricate dance of life's highs and lows. The verses beautifully navigate the stormy skies and bright dawns, urging us to embrace each moment as a precious gift. Through pain and joy, the poet learns to keep eyes on the steps ahead, finding grace in the ebb and flow of ordinary time. The poem weaves a tapestry of darkness and light, reminding us that every experience, be it sorrow or laughter, deserves our loving gaze.

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Written on July 21, 2020

Submitted by Mawphniang.Napoleon on November 12, 2023

Modified by Mawphniang.Napoleon on November 12, 2023

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Mawphniang Napoleon

Mawphniang is a person who is always striving to live life to the fullest. He is someone who is always open to new ideas and ways of living and is unafraid to take risks in order to explore the unknown. He is passionate about life and is always looking for ways to make use of his time and energy. He has an inquisitive nature, and is always looking for answers to life's mysteries and questions. Though Mawphniang does not pretend to have all the answers, he is determined to taste life and live a simple life, without overcomplicating things. He's a person who appreciates the small moments and cherishes the little things in life. He enjoys spending time in nature, exploring the world, and connecting with people. He is a person who is always up for a new adventure and never stops learning. He is on a daily journey of self-discovery, trying to make sense of the world and his place in it. more…

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