Analysis of No Business Showed



There's no business.
Like showed business.
To go shown to be known.

Many find this for them more appealing.
Than pretending it for them is done.
Others sit awaiting when there's business.
A kind of business for them that comes.

There's no business.
Like showed business.
For those told to wait patiently.
Regardless if it's not yet to believe.
People are asked to pray faithfully.
On bended knees...
Even,
if it takes...
Their knees done to bleed!

Oh...oh...oh...
There's no business,
Like showed business.
For people known in need.
But they pray one day they'll see it come.
That business for then done,
To come...
Eventually!


Scheme AAx xbax AAcxcxxxd xAAdebec
Poetic Form
Metre 1110 1110 111111 1011111010 101011111 1010101110 011101111 1110 1110 11111100 0101111101 101111100 1101 10 111 11111 1 1110 1110 110101 111111111 110111 11 01000
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 630
Words 134
Sentences 23
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 9, 8
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 120
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Written on November 09, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on November 09, 2023

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