Analysis of Jesus on the Sea



The disciples out on the sea
A tumultuous storm comes up
Thunder claps and lightening strikes
Lord help us is their cry

Suddenly an apparition appears!
Jesus is walking on the water
 Be not afraid! It is I!
Peter steps out of the boat

He's walking toward His Master
Then he looked at the waves
He suddenly sinks down!
Lord save me he cries!

Jesus lifts him out of the water
He realizes he's in the boat
Oh Peter why did you doubt?
Jesus says peace be still

The calm surrounds them all
The disciples are amazed
Truly He is the Son of God!


Scheme XXXA XBAC BXXX BCXX XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 00101101 0100111 10101001 111111 100101001 101101010 1101111 1011101 11001110 111101 110011 11111 101111010 11001001 1101111 101111 010111 0010101 10110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 543
Words 114
Sentences 7
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 85
Words per stanza (avg) 21

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Jesus showed up when the disciples needed Him most!

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Written on November 01, 1952

Submitted by carlaj.62423 on November 01, 2023

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