Analysis of Winithread



Winithread
By Chris Commodore © 2007

Teeny wriggling mini heads
They dwarf the smallest pinheads
Wee dots so small the human eye
Without a scope cannot espy

The Master's divine trademark
Almighty circumspection
No faults, mistakes, no blemish lack
True heavenly perfection

A speck from Eve two fortnights waits
A partner crumb from Adam starts
Then both dots do the dance of fate
To force-fill earth with crucial hearts

They stay and swim together
Hugging that life-giving wall
Six thousand hours later
The story of us all

That union lasts but for a while
With Nature at the helm
Each outcome is without a guile
All doubting minds to overwhelm

Imagine all who's walked this realm
The layman, Emperor, the king
Who've sat at any earthly helm
All products of that teeny-weenie thing

Divine microbiology
Since that most precious morn
Preceded all technology
Before the stars were born


Scheme AX BBXC XDXD XEAE FGFG HIHI IJIJ CKCK
Poetic Form Etheree  (27%)
Metre 1 1110 101101 110101 11110101 01011010 010011 010010 11011101 1100010 0111111 01011101 11110111 11111101 1101010 1011101 1101010 010111 11011101 110101 1110101 1101101 01011111 01010001 01110101 110111011 010100 111101 01010100 010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 890
Words 156
Sentences 1
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

This poem is the result of observations in a micro biology setting where the intricacies of reproduction was the main topic for several weeks. It is also an attempt to highlight the mysteries hidden in life and each human birth.

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Submitted by ti.min on November 01, 2023

Modified by ti.min on November 01, 2023

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