Analysis of Whispers in the Wind

Oscar Auliq-Ice 1994 (Port Elizabeth)



Rest your thoughts on the horizon,
In this space, you can redefine.
No gaze to judge or trace your journey,
Just the dance of stars and the moon's lullaby.

I hear the whispers of the wind,
Promising to hold what's deep within.
Echoes of your dreams, I'll softly keep,
Imagine me as breezes that your tales sweep.

In the embrace of night, we find our tune,
Even if miles apart, under the same moon.
Should shadows ever cloud your sight,
Dial 1000-334, I'll be your guiding light.

I hear the whispers of the wind,
Promising to hold what's deep within.
Echoes of your dreams, I'll softly keep,
Imagine me as breezes that your tales sweep.

In our silent talks, the universe aligns,
A dance of hearts, like intertwined vines.
When you feel lost in the city's roar,
Find me in the winds, I'll be your shore.

Oh, the whispers (Hush now, hush now) of the wind,
Are a promise, forever to be pinned.
Echoes of your dreams, I'll softly keep,
Imagine me as breezes that your tales sweep.

Let the world echo with our song,
Hear it rise and surge along.
The winds that tell of our bond so fine,
Carry tales of a love, forever to shine.

Let the echoes rise and soar,
Carrying stories, myths, and more.
Of two souls, in the winds they confide,
Tales of love, forever side by side.


Scheme xaxx BCDD eeff BCDD gghh bxDD iiaa hhjj
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 11110010 01111001 111111110 1011100110 11010101 100111101 101111101 01011101111 00011111101 10110110011 1110111 10111101 11010101 100111101 101111101 01011101111 01010101001 011110011 111100101 110011111 10101111101 1010010111 101111101 01011101111 101101101 1110101 0111110111 10110101011 1010101 10010101 111001101 111010111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,271
Words 272
Sentences 16
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 121
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Written on October 27, 2023

Submitted by Auliq-Ice on October 31, 2023

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