Analysis of Scorch



Darling drum on my heart
Pussy bum fun ripping on my body
Scars burning my heart
I see it in my eyes
Everybody dies
Flash
Flash
Cries
Cries
Boom
Boom
Pay your sin
Work in these lies
Forgive me my dear
When I'm here though...
I hear your pain with each breath you warm this cold ear
Fire warm me
Your love adorn me
Say I love you
Once more
Whip whip tare into this sun
Try to find a wife in this emition of air
My life is in my life
Die... Live live live live live live live
Dooom
Faith come in, draw me into your pull
Magnet of fire swirl
I yearn for your heart
Say you do
Say that your will is my will
Good byes bring me to your bills
Pay up your love in me
Bliss find this firey air
Boom
Pleasure of cum
Taste my earth on your lips
Seas of sand
Crash into mountains
Grow on gerth
Feat
Feat
Talking over the world
In every thought and word
In your mind


Scheme abaccDDCCEEfcghibbjklmnoepqajrsbmEtuvwxYYz1 2
Poetic Form
Metre 101111 1011101110 11011 111011 1001 1 1 1 1 1 1 111 1011 01111 1111 111111111111 1011 11011 1111 11 1110111 1110101111 111011 11111111 1 110110111 101101 11111 111 1111111 1111111 111101 11111 1 1011 111111 111 10110 111 1 1 101001 0100101 011
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 854
Words 181
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 44
Lines Amount 44
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 667
Words per stanza (avg) 179
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Written on October 16, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 16, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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