Analysis of Pain in my soul



It's so hard to let go, But the God that I know will help me grow , so much pain in my soul, how can I let you go , thoes hugs and big laughs I'll miss so much more, I never felt alone growing up with you because your presence was sweet to my soul, To lose you hurts the most the grief is held in my soul.


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Characters 306
Words 67
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 228
Words per line (avg) 69
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About this poem

I dedicated this poem to my brother he was killed in prison this was extremely very hard on myself and mother and we were left full of sorrow. He was killed inside a very horrible prison. I wrote this poem because my emotions were torn so deep and I wrote it because when that grief dies and we can smile again we will always have his memories of happiness within.

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Written on July 12, 2023

Submitted by Jazzypeaches88 on September 08, 2023

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Adrienne Sade Jones

A loving mother , daughter and sister from Augusta Georgia a passion for music and nature and also a humble soul human bean I love wholeheartly and I give my all on things I like to do. more…

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