Analysis of Second Family



This life sure has its list of firsts
Like kisses or a drink
The words that you're about to read
Are what I truly think.

The past two girls I used to date
Their parents never cared
For me so when it comes to you
I was not quite prepared.

Your mom has always been so kind
And welcoming to me
I love her daughter very much
I hope it's clear to see.

Your dad's accustomed to me too
I like it when we talk
About his stories growing up
Who knew he was a jock?

Your sisters, nieces, nephews too
I still think of the day
I met them all for the first time
And prayed it went OK.

The boys just kind of stared at me
I would expect no less
It's weird when someone new shows up
My nerves were such a mess.

Your niece was talking most the time
Which kept me really calm
Just sitting there on one big couch
And waiting for your mom.

Your grandma loves me very much
Your grandpa does as well
I guarantee their love for me
Is cause how hard you fell.

They say you don't just marry one
You get their family too
The thought just makes me smile wide
I get them all, plus you.


Scheme XAXA XBCB XDED CXFX CGHG DIFI HJXJ EKDK XCXC
Poetic Form Quatrain  (89%)
Metre 11111111 110101 01110111 111101 01111111 110101 11111111 111101 1111111 010011 11010101 111111 11010111 111111 01110101 111101 11010101 111101 11111011 011111 01111111 110111 1111111 110101 11110101 111101 11011111 010111 11011101 11111 1011111 111111 11111101 1111001 0111111 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,064
Words 234
Sentences 9
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 91
Words per stanza (avg) 24

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Dedicated to my future in laws

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Written on September 25, 2023

Submitted by Eminemfan25 on September 26, 2023

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