Analysis of Time

Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)



Is working on us

although,
it’s not the enemy.

Trying to find answers
to the questions.

Of what’s going on
between you and me?

Sometimes,
you pull me up so close

i can hardly breathe.

Then, push me away
Only to find your mood has changed

Then, you don’t want me-to leave.

Make up your mind…

Don’t waste!
Time

Copyright ©2023 CEF2


Scheme X XA XX XA XX X XX B X XX B
Poetic Form
Metre 11011 1 110100 101110 1010 10101 01101 01 111111 11101 11101 10111111 1111111 1111 11 1 101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 367
Words 91
Sentences 7
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 1, 1, 2, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 23
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Written on 2015

Submitted by Charles2 on September 18, 2023

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