Analysis of Bleeding



Today I looked you in the eye.
I watched as you walked away,
Each second hurting more than the last.
I used to stare into your eyes,
I felt safe, and saw their beauty,
But now all I see is my own depressing reflection.
Today I looked you in the eye.
A total of three times,
Three knifes in my chest,
Three scratches on my brain.
I’m bleeding for you,
So I at least need to know that
You’re okay.
I almost loved myself when I loved you.


Scheme AbcdefAghijkbj
Poetic Form
Metre 01111001 1111101 110101101 11110111 11101110 11111111010010 01111001 010111 11011 110111 11011 11111111 11 11111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 439
Words 100
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 332
Words per stanza (avg) 88
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Written on September 05, 2023

Submitted by Raynestorm9 on September 05, 2023

Modified by Raynestorm9 on September 05, 2023

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