Analysis of Mishaps



I knew a man named Luke
Who thought he might rebuke
The wind for knocking off
His hat right when he coughed,

Before he could complain,
The sky was filled with rain,
So he began to swear
At clouds that didn't care.

Luke started walking home
But stepped on gooey foam.
He fell and said, "Of course!"
Then yelled 'till he was hoarse.


Scheme AAXX BBCC DDEE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 110111 111101 011101 111111 011101 011111 110111 111101 110101 111101 110111 111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 332
Words 71
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 85
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

An unhappy day.

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Written on August 29, 2023

Submitted by stevec.24118 on August 29, 2023

Modified by stevec.24118 on August 29, 2023

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