Analysis of The Caged Sky



I was brought to this place as a baby
Torn from my mother’s breast
My family’s screams I still hear in my dreams
With the sound of my mother’s last breath

Sentenced to life for my beauty
Kept here for the people to see
They only care about money and objects
And that’s what they’ve made out of me

For they made me an inmate, a prisoner
The sky now has bars in the way
As for my gentle old mother
Her hand made a perfect ashtray


Scheme AXXX AAXA BCBC
Poetic Form Quatrain  (33%)
Metre 1111111010 111101 111111011 101111011 10111110 11101011 11010110010 01111111 1111110100 01111001 11110110 0110011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 451
Words 100
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 112
Words per stanza (avg) 29

About this poem

This is about the awful murder and kidnapping of the African Lowland Chimpanzees during the 1990s. Before Dr Jane Goodall and her tireless work brought in Army Rangers to protect the remaining chimps from the poachers, most of these beautiful wild animals were sold to zoos and private ownership...or turned into ‘ objet d’art ‘ if too old or ornery.

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Written on August 25, 2023

Submitted by KatMaddi on August 25, 2023

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Kat Maddi

Mother of two daughters from York U.K. Have been writing and playing guitar for my whole life. I also enjoy motorbikes, zombies and animals. Cats are the reason I exist and I am a proud mad cat woman. more…

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