Analysis of The Need To Greed And Compete



The need to feed greed and compete,
Has created problems...
Today,
That has made excuses to make...
An abnormal  craze of life to live,
Normalized to delude and fiction...
As a temporary inconvenience,
For a society on the edge...
Of having its unique democracy,
Ruined and pushed over a cliff.
With this done to demonstrate,
How easy minds can be used to illustrate...
The taking of false beliefs,
Spewed out from the mouths...
Defending to protect deception to accept it.
Regardless of the evidence and proof to see,
Openly and free to receive.
Yet people would rather pay to endorse,
The supporting of destroying themselves.

To please and follow behind,
Someone more familiar with corruption.
Fraud, crime, laws to disobey.
And betrayal done to commit treason.
Although...
Have been made to believe as if cemented,
In steel and concrete.
That they are being replaced,
By a multitude of ethnic faces.
Yet...
Their being replaced,
Seems more to be a wish to want...
Done to observe it witnessed,
Them to do to themselves.

Should or should not this activity,
Be envied?
Or thought to be a process to initiate,
Jealousy among the masses.
Feeling to have been purposely ignored!?

Who is it THAT blessed with brilliance,
Could or can.
Would to feel they should,
Explain the benefits of this madness?
THEN to feel obliged to sacrifice,
The living the rest of their life...
Being subjected to eyeball rolling.
Evil stares.
And receiving anonymous emails.
From people who go out of their way to ask,
If attention had been given to prioritize...
Messages sent to ensure them noticed!

The need to greed and compete,
A doing of craze these days...
Of mental instabilities.
Establishing yet another industry.
Created for the wellbeing of all!
Hoping for a cure to heal their nutness!


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Poetic Form
Metre 01111001 101010 01 11101011 101011111 10101010 10100010 100100101 1101010100 10011001 111110 1101111110 0101101 11101 0101010101011 010101000111 10001101 1101101101 0010101001 1101001 110101010 111101 0010110110 1 11110111010 01001 111101 101011010 1 1101 11110111 1101110 111101 111110100 110 1111011010 10001010 1011110001 11111110 111 11111 0101001110 11101110 01001111 100101110 101 0010010001 11011111111 101011101010 1001101110 0111001 0101111 1100100 01001010100 010101011 101011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,777
Words 358
Sentences 35
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 19, 14, 5, 12, 6
Lines Amount 56
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 278
Words per stanza (avg) 60
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Written on August 24, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on August 24, 2023

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