Analysis of Love Among Me
Move Among Me
Casting my gaze towards the sky
My broken heart tries to reason why
Instead of asking how
To respond to here and now
I fall to my knees and cry.
The best plans are all laid down
Fallen apart all over the ground
Everything I ever owned
Wiped out a life and a home
The life I imagined now is gone.
Move among me and see sadness
Gripping grief and utter madness
Happiness is fading fast
Smiling through just can’t last
Smoldering ashes of pure gladness.
I dare to defy this impending doom
My demise no one can assume
I am a fighter you see
Choosing to get up and be
Destined for joy in full bloom.
Copyright © 2023 Charles Edward York
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| Scheme | A BBCCB XXXXX DDEED FFAAF XX |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 1011 10110101 110111101 011101 1011101 1111101 0111111 100111001 101101 1101001 011010111 10110110 10101010 1001101 101111 10010111 1110110101 10111101 1101011 1011101 1011011 101101 111110111101100010101010010111111010100100010110010100101010 |
| Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
| Characters | 878 |
| Words | 175 |
| Sentences | 6 |
| Stanzas | 6 |
| Stanza Lengths | 1, 5, 5, 5, 5, 2 |
| Lines Amount | 23 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 30 |
| Words per line (avg) | 7 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 115 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 28 |
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A fighter never gives up
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