Analysis of My Cat



When all is said and all is done
I always turn to that furry one
Who's been with me through all the years
Of lonely nights and unshod tears.

He's getting old and feeble now
I should say good-bye, but I don't know how
To look into his trusting eyes...
I just don't think I know how.

Sometimes I see the kitten inside
Chasing shadows; without any pride
He's always provided a meal for me
A mouse in exchange for his monthly food fee

Last night I shooed him off my lap
I was busy with life, and needed a nap
I'll never forget that look in his eyes
A mixture of love with a bit of surprise

Please don't ever shoo away
The love that's given, day after day
When your arms are empty...what's left in your lap
Is a heart full of sorrow and more need for a nap.

Now I lay him down to sleep
But that look in his eyes, I'll always keep
To remind me to never, shoo away
A love that is given, day after day.


Scheme AAXX BBCB DDEE FFCC GGFF HHGG
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 11110111 11111101 11111101 1101011 11010101 1111111111 11011101 1111111 011101001 10101101 110100111 01001111011 11111111 11101101001 1100111011 01011101101 1110101 011101101 111111011 1011110011101 1111111 111011111 1011110101 0111101101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 899
Words 192
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 114
Words per stanza (avg) 30

About this poem

This is just something I'm going through right now, and thought I'd write a poem about it.

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Written on July 27, 1923

Submitted by lovingempath on July 27, 2023

1:00 min read
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Robin Loving

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