Analysis of The Mountains Make Us Seem Smallish



Lake at Geneva Switzerland
(inspired by a beautiful Geneva image)

Just call into the empty

And echo sings back soon

The Alps are all around you

The sunny warmth of June.

The alpen flowers sparkle

Released from icy hold

And you are left so humble

As God's grandeur is told.

It's in the peaks above you.

The goats who leap sans fear.

It's in the eagle's high path

For him the heavens draw near

It's in the night-time quaintness

When window lanterns bring

The sense of family laughing

And most inclined to sing

All the glories of their Maker.

Who formed these mountains too.

The crimson dusk just witnessed.

And coming of the dew.


Scheme XX X A B A C D C D B E X E X F F F X B X B
Poetic Form
Metre 11010100 0101010001010 1101010 010111 0111011 010111 011010 011101 0111110 110111 1001011 011111 1001011 1101011 100111 110101 01110010 010111 10101110 111101 0101110 010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 651
Words 145
Sentences 8
Stanzas 21
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 24
Words per stanza (avg) 5
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Written on July 17, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on July 17, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on July 25, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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