Analysis of This House



Alone. Empty. Clean.
The house is so quiet when you're not home.

Just photos. Furniture. Neatly arranged toys. Clothes. Windows And Rooms.
So much to do as I wait for you.
You walk in...
Smiles...Giggles...
Shoes thrown on the floor...
Millions of toys all out to play...
But this is just a house when you're not home.
Waiting for the day review,
Waiting to see the world through you.
Young. Innocent. New.
TV. Reading. Cleaning.
But this is just a house when you're not home.
Home Now!
Cooking. Cleaning. Feeding.
Playing. Yelling. Jumping.
Snuggles. Eskimos.
Toys. Books. School work.

I wait for evening,
When you walk through the door and make our house a home again.


Scheme xa bcxbxxAcccdAxddxx dx
Poetic Form
Metre 01101 0111101111 111001001111001 111111111 110 1 11101 10111111 1111011111 101011 10110111 11001 111010 1111011111 11 101010 101010 110 1111 11110 111101011010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 684
Words 139
Sentences 38
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 2, 17, 2
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 168
Words per stanza (avg) 39

About this poem

I wrote this home waiting for my son to be dropped off back home from camp one night, missing him while working all day. It really got to me sitting home alone, when he's normally always with me, how my house is just a house without him here. My son makes our home have heart and soul.

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Written on June 29, 2023

Submitted by sagerk0418 on June 29, 2023

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Kathryn Sager

I am a 29 year old from NY. I've had a love for poetry since I was very young. My dad used to write poems and turn them into songs my whole life. It's a passion. I am a mama of a little boy who is my life. more…

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