Analysis of Surroundings



As I walk with the music on full blast

I try not to remember my past 

"Live the moment while it lasts" they all say 

What if I don't want to

What if I want to escape

What if I want to run away 

I'd rather listen to music through my headset and fly away

With no threats

and not vex the people I love

not vex the ones I rebuffed

But what If I can't escape

What if I can't run away 

What if I can't fly away 

My headset sends me to this place

Far from all the misery

Sends me to this place

Far from everything

So if I can't run away

I'll just put my headset on

and skip to that one song

that makes me belong


Scheme A A B X C B B X X X C B B D X D X B X E E
Poetic Form
Metre 1111010111 111101011 1010111111 111111 1111101 11111101 110101101110101 111 01101011 1101101 1111101 1111101 1111101 1111111 1110100 11111 1110 1111101 111111 011111 11101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 655
Words 160
Sentences 1
Stanzas 21
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 22
Words per stanza (avg) 6

About this poem

This is a poem I wrote when i was feeling alone and did not want to talk to anyone about it. I love music and got inspired to write about it.

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Written on June 29, 2023

Submitted by on June 29, 2023

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Kate Stokle-Allain

I grew up in Paris, still live there. I love to write poetry and love to play sports. I am 14 years old and speak French and English. more…

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