Analysis of Purpose and pain



I envy your faith
Mine is empty , in vain
Maybe what you believe
Gives a purpose to the pain

When everything stops
Only dark can remain
I’m of the belief
There’s no purpose to the pain

If you confess
Do your penance once again
You will be forgiven
And given purpose to the pain

I suppose I’ll just suffer
Between a rock and my brain
Between hopes and what’s real
Between the purpose and the pain


Scheme XAXA XAXA XXXA XAXA
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 11011 111001 101101 1010101 1101 101101 11001 1110101 1101 1110101 111010 01010101 1011110 0101011 011001 01010001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 421
Words 93
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 79
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Written on June 06, 2023

Submitted by Jackbee on June 06, 2023

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