Analysis of My Heart's pain
MY HEART’S PAIN
I missed those times when you’re with me,
My tears that you alone can see,
I want to feel your touch of love,
Showing the faith that I must have.
Sharing is one of your habit,
You’re generous, so be with it.
Others might find you spry and strong,
Unable of doing the wrong.
Going from place-to-place makes you happy,
Running to you when I am so weary,
All your memories I have in my mind,
Never failed me to cry and have to find.
Do I need to keep this unbearable pain?
My yearning for you are like the drops of rain.
Once isn’t enough to live a life and be with you,
My heart still longing grandma, I hope you knew.
| Scheme | A BBXX XXCC BBDD AAEE |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 111 11111111 11110111 11111111 10011111 10111110 11001111 10111101 01011001 1011111110 1011111110 1110011011 1011110111 11111101001 11011110111 110111010111 11110101111 |
| Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
| Characters | 661 |
| Words | 145 |
| Sentences | 8 |
| Stanzas | 5 |
| Stanza Lengths | 1, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
| Lines Amount | 17 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 28 |
| Words per line (avg) | 7 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 97 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 25 |
About this poem
This poem was made by the poet for her loving grandmother. She only was with her for only a 3 years. Their bond may be short but the life that her grandmother shared with her was so remarkable that leads her to create poem. To show her affection and at the same time her longing for so many years.
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