Analysis of Forever Yours



You had hash, you had weed, now you have matured to me. I can thrill and satisfy you beyond your control. First time with me and you will yearn for more, after that you belong to me, I will own your heart and soul.
In your efforts to have more of me you will lie, cheat and steal for me and only me. Your family and friends will put me down and say that I'm no good for you, but try to leave me and your pain will be greater than you can bare. Then your hunger for me will grow and never stop for you are mine and we will be together forever until.

DEATH due us apart.

Yours Forever faithfully


Scheme XX X X
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111101111110101011011111011111101101111111101 01101111111110111010111000111110111111111111011111011111110111101011111011101001001 11101 1010100
Characters 650
Words 132
Sentences 8
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 1
Lines Amount 4
Letters per line (avg) 115
Words per line (avg) 31
Letters per stanza (avg) 153
Words per stanza (avg) 41

About this poem

Wrote it as if the drug was a woman.

Font size:
 

Written on May 01, 2004

Submitted by scottr.39670 on June 01, 2023

Modified by scottr.39670 on June 01, 2023

39 sec read
3

SCOTT A RUSINKO

Born in Richmond, CA. Moved to Eatonville Washington when I was two. Went to Eatonville School District for 18 years and graduated from Eatonville High School in 1984. Signed up for delayed entry program in the military (Navy) when I was 17. My first command was aboard the USS ENTERPRISE CVN 65 where "Top Gun" was filmed on. Next duty station was VP-31 Squadron in Mountain View California where I met my lovely wife Lisa of over 30 years. Last active duty station was USS CALIFORNIA CGN 36 in Bremerton Washington. For next 12 years I served Navy Reserves, Army National Guard and retired in the Air Force Reserve at McChord Air Force Base now JBLM. Now reside in Tacoma, WA with my family more…

All SCOTT A RUSINKO poems | SCOTT A RUSINKO Books

1 fan

Discuss this SCOTT A RUSINKO poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Forever Yours" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 28 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/160550/forever-yours>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    April 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    2
    days
    20
    hours
    17
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    From which London landmark did Wordsworth celebrate the view in his poem beginning: "Earth has not any thing to show more fair..."
    A Hampstead Heath
    B Westminster Bridge
    C Waterloo Sunset
    D The Tower of London