Analysis of DOOM/CATACOMBS

R.J. Bernard 2007 (Massachusetts)



Lying in my Tomb

Ready for my doom, doom, doom

Never gonna bloom, bloom, bloom

I'm forever in my catacomb

Stuck in my Tomb, Tomb, Tomb

Lost, yet fulfilled

Lying in my doom, doom, doom

Fulfilled, yet bitter

I'll never be a winner  

Stuck in my own catacombs

Felt like I done lost my game

Always going home feeling just “fine”

My doom, my tears, lately I've been feeling nauseous

Stuck in my own doom, doom, doom


Scheme A A A X A X A B B X X X X A
Poetic Form
Metre 10011 1011111 1010111 10100110 101111 1101 1001111 01110 1101010 101110 1111111 11011011 111110111010 1011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 440
Words 103
Sentences 1
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 22
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Written on May 26, 2023

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