Analysis of Aqueous Unraveling of Secrets



In the realm of lunar waltz and aqueous embrace,
By the stream's brink, our fingers interlaced,
We observed the nocturnal ballet commence,
As the argent orbs flit on liquid's face.
In the hush of darkness, our pulses confide,
An enigma veiled in your gaze, I yearned to decode.

Desire to decipher the chronicles your orbs encased,
In the interstellar expanse, our star-crossed fates,
In the quietude, our ardent hearts disclosed,
Entwined there, palm against palm, we found solace,
Beside the brook, where the astral shimmer graced,
And the moon's procession upon the ripples took place.

In the swirling currents, a cosmic dance evolves,
As the celestial ballet mirrored by the water's surface,
A symphony of light and darkness, our souls embraced,
We bore witness, as we sat by the river, our lives interlaced,
Unspoken mysteries, in the somber hours conveyed,
The murmur of our hearts, in the moonlit night, conspired.

In clandestine whispers, our fervent spirits confided,
A cosmic connection, as the universe revolved,
The river's murmur, a testament to secrets relayed,
Our existence intertwined in the moon's silvery trace,
Hand in hand, creating an unbreakable bond, an alliance,
Beside the flowing waters, under the sparkling night sky's expanse.

Infinite tales, your iridescent eyes contained,
The delicate filaments of our shared ardor, enlaced,
As we reveled in the lunar choreography, entranced,
The secrets of our hearts, in tender whispers exchanged,
A sacred communion, our love's unspoken language,
By the river's edge, where the moonlight's serenade graced.

The universe itself adorned the water's surface,
As we reveled in the beauty of the ephemeral space,
Our hearts' confessions, in the silence, interlaced,
The secrets of the night, as one, we sought to embrace,
To unravel the enigmas, your gaze so elegantly displayed,
Under the cosmic canopy, where the celestial ballet engaged.

In the moon's embrace, our love danced on the water's edge,
The secrets we whispered, in the night, forever encased,
By the river, we sat, hand in hand, our stories unveiled and interlaced.

The poem is part of a full version found in the book "Homo Sapiens" Part XVII, written by Mawphniang Napoleon. This book is part of the popular "Homo Sapiens" book series, which can be purchased online at various online bookstores, such as Amazon. The book is available for purchase for those who are interested in reading the complete version of the poem. Remember to get all the books from the "Homo Sapiens" series, as well as other books by the same author.

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Khublei Shihajar Nguh,
Dhanewad
Thank you


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 2,709
Words 506
Sentences 14
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 3, 1, 1, 3
Lines Amount 44
Letters per line (avg) 48
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 213
Words per stanza (avg) 44

About this poem

This poem is a beautiful depiction of two lovers sitting by a river and admiring the moon's reflection on the water. The imagery is vivid and transports the reader to a serene, romantic setting. The poem explores the theme of love and the connection between two people through the use of celestial imagery and metaphors. The speaker yearns to decode the mysteries in their lover's gaze, and the two souls confide in each other through whispers, creating an unbreakable bond. The poem highlights the beauty of the natural world and the way it can bring people together. 

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Written on July 26, 2019

Submitted by Mawphniang.Napoleon on May 24, 2023

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Mawphniang Napoleon

Mawphniang is a person who is always striving to live life to the fullest. He is someone who is always open to new ideas and ways of living and is unafraid to take risks in order to explore the unknown. He is passionate about life and is always looking for ways to make use of his time and energy. He has an inquisitive nature, and is always looking for answers to life's mysteries and questions. Though Mawphniang does not pretend to have all the answers, he is determined to taste life and live a simple life, without overcomplicating things. He's a person who appreciates the small moments and cherishes the little things in life. He enjoys spending time in nature, exploring the world, and connecting with people. He is a person who is always up for a new adventure and never stops learning. He is on a daily journey of self-discovery, trying to make sense of the world and his place in it. more…

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