Analysis of The punished heart



The punished heart- I see her dead in a field. I remember my brother filled with hate he put a tie around my neck and dragged me around the house. True love denied to me alone decript alone alone . My soul burning for all to see in flames am I. No one notices or cares as I scream in my weak moments. My solace seeing love stories not mine. Hope and desire far away from me. Will anyone look at my face and seek my soul that is in so much torment so that we can become one? Each year passes I still desire children no matter. How much punishment can one heart take in a desert of abandonment. For I am cursed.


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Characters 609
Words 123
Sentences 11
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 474
Words per line (avg) 124
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Words per stanza (avg) 124

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My life has been a hell

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Written on April 23, 2023

Submitted by Lowlarr on May 22, 2023

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Larry Lowry

Written many years never published more…

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