Analysis of THE VOICE



be afraid
be quite afraid
a voice from deep inside me said
paralyzed though you may feel
you can't be hurt you shan't be dead

just stay here
embrace the fear
some lessons need you not to learn
self-preserved your pride may heal
your heart shall beat that's my concern

trust in me
yes just in me
your saving grace your last defense
you'll never taste life's sting, defeat
nor face the losers consequence

nor ridicule
you're such a fool
protect i will from unseen threats
your reputation's brittle shell
embarrassment looms worse than death

you'll grow old
so very old
when tales are tall your yarns are spun
adventures, heroisms, hopes and
dreams of things you wish you'd done

i am afraid
yes quite afraid
the song of fear now tempts my choice
though frozen sick and hollow, weak
i face my fear and kill the voice


Scheme AABCB XXDCD EEXXX FFXXX GGHXH AAIXI
Poetic Form Tetractys  (37%)
Etheree  (33%)
Metre 101 1101 01110111 101111 111111111 111 0101 11011111 1011111 11111101 101 1101 11011101 11011101 11010100 110 1101 01111011 11101 01001111 111 1101 11111111 010110 1111111 1101 1101 01111111 11010101 11110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 817
Words 153
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 109
Words per stanza (avg) 25
Font size:
 

Submitted by BB8MITH on May 21, 2023

Modified by BB8MITH on May 22, 2023

48 sec read
7

Discuss this Robert James Smith poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "THE VOICE" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 27 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/159882/the-voice>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    More poems by

    Robert James Smith

    »

    April 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    3
    days
    21
    hours
    23
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    How many lines does a sonnet have?
    A 16
    B 14
    C 12
    D 18