Analysis of Heaven



I’ve always been skeptical of heaven
A place where souls ascend to after death
Where the pearly gates open wide
And streets are lined with gold

But what if a soul doesn’t make the cut?
Do they remain in a void of darkness?
Is death the end of all that we are?
Or is there something more?

These questions plague my mind
As I grapple with the unknown
Wondering if there is life after death
Or if it’s just a lifeless abyss

But even if there is an afterlife
I’m not sure I want to live forever
The idea of eternally existing
Is both intriguing and terrifying

I find comfort in the thought of returning
To the earth that created me
To decompose and nourish
The cycle of life and death

Perhaps the true beauty of existence
Lies in accepting the impermanence
And cherishing every moment we are given
Before we return to the earth's embrace.   


Scheme ABXX XCXX XXBX XXDD DXXB XCAX
Poetic Form
Metre 111100110 0111011101 10101101 011111 111011101 1101001110 110111111 111101 110111 11101001 1001111101 111101001 110111110 1111111010 001010100010 110100100 11100011010 10110101 101010 0101101 0101101010 1001001 0100100101110 0110110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 853
Words 166
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 112
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Written on May 17, 2023

Submitted by JoeStrickland on May 17, 2023

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Joe Strickland

I'm just a regular, blue collar, working stiff who took an interest in writing poetry many years ago but until recently I haven't had a desire to share any with anyone or pursue publication. I'm an unpublished fork lift operator by night, and a day drinker by choice. I can be followed on Twitter @JoeStricklandSC more…

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