Analysis of Alive



to be alive is to sit in your chair
as the storms devour each fruit in the grove,
wherefore slowly drip dry eyes to a cove
that through torn curtains in broad windows stare.

watching scales incline until they stop fair
together, low moving are heard the drove,
looking for food with a starless sky rove,
and bright the crack from thick whips quickly flare.

a wide porch, cigar in mouth, and a drink
grips a hand that has poured what the night black
has left dead floating at a seashores's brink;

regarding the wind, loose lays set the tack,
thus all like a ship to the deep stunned sink,
drowned cast tall sprout on sands, fluted as wrack.


Scheme ABBA ABBA CDC DCD
Poetic Form
Metre 1101111011 10101011001 110111101 1111001101 1010101111 0101101101 101110111 0101111101 0110101001 1011111011 111101011 0100111101 1110110111 111111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 645
Words 130
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3, 3
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 127
Words per stanza (avg) 30

About this poem

This poem is about the pride of being alive, despite how oppressive life may seem. The fact that we are alive gives us the opportunity to resurface new and brave when we feel that we might drown in some problems that the oppressors create.

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Written on May 13, 2023

Submitted by robertrad2021 on May 13, 2023

Modified by robertrad2021 on August 13, 2023

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