Analysis of Depression Consumed Me



Feeling depressed,  
An insidious beast,
Consumes, devours masses
That cross its furious ways.
 A loud vacuum cleaner
That nastily aspirate
The joyful life that I truly deserve.
It's like a monstrous thief,
That steals my happiness,
leaving my being,  so powerless.

In bed, I lay
weary, all-day
tears flowing
like a raging river,
Uncontrollable.
My heart aches.
My head pounds.
My soul cries out in pain.
The darkness creeps in.

It’s like a Nimbostratus,
Overhead, it looms.
Conceived when a student wanted
To shoot me in the head.
It's dark and heavy,
filled me with dread
It sapped my energy,
left me feeling dead.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1001 101001 0101010 1111001 011010 1110 0101111001 110101 111100 101101100 0111 1011 110 101010 0100 111 111 111101 01010 1101 10111 01101010 111001 11010 1111 111100 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 636
Words 129
Sentences 11
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 10, 9, 8
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 160
Words per stanza (avg) 35

About this poem

Depression is an overwhelming and pervasive force that consume many of us. It's important to seek help and support. There are many resources available out there. You are not alone. Be brave.

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Written on April 18, 2023

Submitted by Wildflower888 on April 18, 2023

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Charmane Joy S Belleza

I am a wife, a mom, and a teacher living simply in the State of Hawaii, USA. I have been writing poems ever since I was in elementary. I don’t claim to be a pro or a poet, writing is just one way for me to express my thoughts, emotions, and opinion. Some of my compositions were published in our college publication and my Ilocano poems and short stories were published in one of the Ilocano publications in the Philippines. I write about anything that appeals to my emotion and interest. I love going to the beach, even just to take a walk or sit on the sand. It’s just relaxing. I also enjoy singing and hanging out with my family. more…

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