Analysis of Zero Thousand Hue



Somehow we like to read our's best
somehow we like to, i must confess
Somehow we like to read our's best
why.......... ?  why.......... ?  why......... ?

Somehow we like to write our words
though other's are beautiful, they perturb
when they catch us off our guard
or we think the writing sounds absurd

Thoughts like rainbows come and go
his is yellow and your's is gold
their's is mellow and her's is scold
Can you see the Big picture unfold?

God looked down and saw the Past
piecemeal rainbows that could not cast
the truest form lies further - another
adding to your's and now add another

You, like God some times might see
higher, bigger, unboxed and free
all the colours contained in view
an endless rainbow of Zero-thousand hue


Scheme AxAx xxxx xbbb ccdd eeff
Poetic Form Quatrain  (40%)
Etheree  (35%)
Tetractys  (25%)
Metre 1111111 11111101 1111111 111 11111101 1101100101 11111101 111010101 111101 11100111 11100111 111011001 1110101 111111 0101110010 1011011010 1111111 1010101 1010101 1101110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 737
Words 135
Sentences 8
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 111
Words per stanza (avg) 27

About this poem

some thoughts, on words, and thoughts. God, having the truest/ biggest thoughts, are probably not as small like ours (many), liking our own views and/ or words best... not seeing the truth in another, in others, all around us.

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Submitted by prayersfor on April 21, 2023

Modified by prayersfor on April 21, 2023

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