Analysis of South Carolina morning, May 2016



Holiday visit to friend
Moncks Corners
Small place northwest
Of Charlston.
Civil War memories
Of courage, waste.
City can’t shake it
Nor want to.
Childhood playground for
Poe before his horrors.

But back to the morning
Buddies Anthony and Jody
Told me to perch
In front lawn by
The one palm.
Neighbour’s rooster
Gave the get moving call.

Mockingbird would arrive
By similar timeliness.
The Master of imitations.
Other birds, farm animals
Gulls, bells, machines.
Lawnmower, for one.
Hard to believe.

The bird has a charmed life
Not to be hurt or killed.
So said Gregory Peck to
His spirited daughter
In that movie.


Scheme XAXBXXXCXA XDXXXEX XXXXXBX XXCED
Poetic Form
Metre 101011 110 111 11 101100 1101 10111 111 111 101110 111010 10100010 1111 0111 011 110 101101 10101 1100100 0101010 1011100 1101 10011 1101 011011 111111 1110011 110010 0110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 623
Words 122
Sentences 13
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 10, 7, 7, 5
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 123
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

A real visit to my friends. Seemed all highlights were about birds. Eagles, ospreys, hummingbirds, mockingbird, indigo bunting. Other highlights were Robinson Island, seafood platters and Mepkin Abbey.

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Written on April 15, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on April 15, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on April 15, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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