Analysis of My Rival



So, what defines a rival?
What makes a great adversary?
Do they have to be male or female?
Or maybe it’s something I cannot yet see?

Isn’t a rival someone who strives to beat another?
In my case, whoever aims for the same life goals as me?
Someone who frustrates, hinders or even harms in some way
The one who forbids me, to be.

What do I perceive to be my biggest threat right now?
Is it the hassles of daily life?
Is it something that really doesn’t need to be worried about?
Or is there something that really does cause me much strife?

So which one is my arch-nemesis?
A true foe, the sworn enemy?
Who is the one that stands before all others?
It’s simple, that one....        ...is me!


Scheme XAXA XAXA XBXB XAXA
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 1101010 1101100 11111111 11011011011 101011111010 01101011011111 111101101011 01101111 1110111110111 110101101 111011011111001 1111011011111 111111100 01101100 11011101110 1101111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 700
Words 148
Sentences 17
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 130
Words per stanza (avg) 35

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A look at ones self

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Written on March 21, 2012

Submitted by chrisw.65202 on March 16, 2023

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