Analysis of cancer is the word



I wonder in my sleep I wonder when I'm awake the question is how much more can I take can I take the loneliness can I take the pain
Can I take the fight that won't end
Can I take the voices that say I'm so brave
Can I take the pressure of staying in the fight that I know I can't win
I wonder how long I will be able to fight just to please others so that they can feel all right


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Written on September 01, 2018

Submitted by portodoll on March 10, 2023

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marie fontes

I've been fighting Kansas sense 2009 this is my fourth round and it's actually the first time I write about my cancer mostly my ride in this for myself and it's usually about all the subjects however that was the year that it was decided that I would lose both breasts this time and everyone around me seem to think I was just supposed to do you know carry on in I found myself trying to lift them up and then I wrote this down that's all more…

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