Analysis of Everything in shambles

Hasan Johnson 1980 (Peoria Illinois)



Apartment falling apart
Car falling apart
Relationships fell apart
My Lord
May I say the Lord’s Prayer and hope for the best or do I get discouraged because stress won’t let me rest
Toss and turn when I try to sleep
I’m almost convinced that rest is for the weak
The meal shall inherit the earth
But who gone inherit these bills
They keep coming
Health falling apart
Finances fell apart
Thought about a means to an end
But If I wake up tomorrow
I’ll start all over again
Who moved my cheese


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Poetic Form
Metre 0101001 11001 010101 11 1110110110111110100111111 10111111 1101111101 01101001 11101011 1110 11001 010101 10101111 1111101 1111001 1111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 512
Words 106
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 394
Words per stanza (avg) 93

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Submitted by HasanM.Johnson on April 08, 2023

Modified on April 08, 2023

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