Analysis of City of Jade
Wake up to snow covered mountains.
Sun rays pure as rain. A gentle sunrise
to melt the clouds away.
A morning sparrows cove. A swallow's
haven to escape the winter cold.
Evergreens and Hackberry trees.
Moss that cover like ocean tides.
People of simple living in garments of
elaborate decorative design ceremonial
dark gray and green. Practicing the art of
Tai-chi in the light of dawn.
The aroma of Cherry blossom trees in
the afternoon bliss. A warm cup of herbal
tea by the window as you near.
Stare through Lotus ponds. Playful Koi
fish that swim through Lily pads. Ripples
that expand conjuring ones soul.
To meditate, To pray, To regenerate.
Each time you hear the gong hit.
Free your mind and let go. Down
waterfalls of two sacred mountains.
Nymfus and Paragon the two sleeping
giants. On top a 10 foot golden Buddha.
A hidden city that prospers in the eastern
sun. Constructed on basic principles.
Be one with nature.
Respect nature. Let nature show you
the way.
Remember the ground from which you
stand. Remember thy ancestors that
built thy father's place.
Winds that carry this sacred chant.
Students of learning. Knowledge that
overflows of streams of emerald green.
In rice grain fields and wheat fields.
Where your spirits run.
The City of Jade. Stone covered walls that
unwhine down a serpents tail.
A sun that crowns mountain tops each
time it sets.
Clouds that suspend that make the heavens
surround this jaded village like a halo.
If you should make the journey. You must
walk up 1000 steps. Through the belly of
a cave where light consumes in dark. Climb
down through jagged rocks of the sleeping
dragon. In tunnels of translucent streams
that glow.
Follow the narrow path to enlightenment.
Where the sun meets your eyes. To unveil
the sacred well of knowledge. Once you indulge and satisfy your thirst.
Stare at two tall red wood doors with 50
golden knobs and golden orbs on each
door. Guarded by two jaded dragons.
Through these red wood doors lies the
city of Jade.
If you seek shelter ye shall find.
If you seek peace ye shall find.
A sense of comfort for thy lost soul.
In this City of Jade the moon and stars
will never seize to shine.
In this city of enchantment. Where
the sun will never die. Be at peace thy
lonesome traveler and be shown the way.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11111010 111110101 110101 01010101 101010101 100101 11101101 10110100101 010100010100 1101100011 1100111 00101101010 0011011110 11010111 11101101 111110110 10110011 110111010 1111011 1110111 10111010 10100110 1011011010 010101100010 1010110100 11110 011011011 01 01001111 10101101 11101 11101101 10110101 10111101 0111011 11101 0101111011 110101 01111011 111 110111010 01110101010 111101011 11110101 011101011 11111010 1001010101 11 10010110100 101111101 0101110110101011 11111111 101010111 110111010 1111110 1011 11110111 1111111 011101111 0110110101 110111 011010101 0111011111 1010001101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 2,483 |
Words | 467 |
Sentences | 57 |
Stanzas | 14 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 4, 4, 3, 3, 6, 8, 5, 6, 6, 3, 3, 4, 6 |
Lines Amount | 64 |
Letters per line (avg) | 28 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 129 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 29 |
About this poem
Since I was 9 have been writing poems and stories being fond of medival times. The life of the Japanese samurai. Life in the high seas of pirates, Greek mythology. This is something I worked on. Hope you enjoy the many stories to come.
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Written on March 28, 2023
Submitted by axbarajas0419 on March 28, 2023
Modified by axbarajas0419 on April 02, 2023
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