Analysis of Jack Blair, Over There (battle of britain)



it was Ryerson in Toronto
physics, cathodes in a rush
And the docks of venturesome
Halifax
for that Britain Battle push,
luxury liner did the passage
young men eager for their post.
soon the sick-rail leaning, over
and those friendships proved
the most.
was it London’s land
or Glasgow?
that part never laid on me.
but a smoky train made Cromarty
firth, and views of Northern Sea.
Sunderland floating bombers
for the radar man to guide.
searching out those furtive U boats
that the Nazis tried to hide.
there were close calls
yes, in measure.
shrapnel, chaos
meeting Huns.
and twas never certain
Living.
in those tricky, risky runs.
but for Jack, a Providence
obliging.
and a luxury liner Home
thankful for the Mercy gathered
that some others had not known.

(jack blair 1922-2010)


Scheme AXXBXXCDXCXAEAEXFXFXDXBXGXXGXXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 11100010 101001 0011100 10 1110101 100101010 1110111 10111010 01101 01 1111 11 1110111 1010111 1011101 1001010 101111 10111011 1010111 1011 1010 1010 101 011010 10 0110101 1110100 010 00100101 10101010 1110111 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 784
Words 150
Sentences 14
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 31, 1
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 311
Words per stanza (avg) 67
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Written on June 28, 2020

Submitted by dougb.19255 on March 28, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on March 28, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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