Analysis of Of Blade and Battle



As the blade grows keen
The breath of life is snuffed out
As the arc is done
The battle is hard won
As silence soothes the spirits


Scheme ABCCD
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Cinquain  (20%)
Metre 10111 0111111 10111 010111 1101010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 130
Words 27
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 104
Words per stanza (avg) 27

About this poem

A tanka I made about swordsmanship and depicting the times of old where disputes and battles were settled by sword.

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Written on July 24, 2022

Submitted by Deshinitai on March 28, 2023

Modified on March 28, 2023

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