Analysis of The Pond

Roberto Suárez Torres 1983 (New York)



Once it used to be our pond in the wild
where we would all bare go to laugh, to dance,
to heal, love, and rant on stones cast by chance,
even if just for an olive-sized while.

Firm before the winds of thunder and hail
lifting tall their crowns to the ruthless sky,
trees full of verdure despite seen awry
with the weight of years gathered at the dale.

Now, the land lips of vagabonds dried out,
and piles laying on a deer lane of sheaf,
scarlet horizons sowed yore asleep sprout

for the rain aught fell and grew thick the leaf,
thereat the veery decided to shout
alone and thin by a shorn tree such grief.


Scheme XAAX BCCB DED EDE
Poetic Form
Metre 11111101001 1111111111 1110111111 1011111011 1010111001 1011110101 111101101 1011110101 1011110011 0110101111 1001011011 1011101101 1011011 0101101111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 609
Words 129
Sentences 3
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3, 3
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 119
Words per stanza (avg) 29

About this poem

This poem is about the sad nostalgia inspired by a special place no longer visited.

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Written on March 26, 2023

Submitted by robertrad2021 on March 26, 2023

Modified by robertrad2021 on May 21, 2023

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