Analysis of Heartache



save us from heartache
time can be short
life together for years
heartache is our fort

quiet minutes keep hours
silence once stood strong
steps divide empty miles
heartache marks our wrong

spent words burnt ash
gordian knotted sinew spine
thin ribbons weep sorrows
heartache a piercing tine

angst screams in anguish
regrets spill dead wine
love like many pearls
lay cast before swine

heartache ever unpleasant
heartache forever unkind
heartache ever silent
heartache forever blind


Scheme XAXA XBXB XCXC XCXC DEDE
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 1111 1111 101011 11101 1010110 10111 101101 11101 1111 1001011 110110 10101 11010 01111 11101 11011 110010 101001 11010 10101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 504
Words 91
Sentences 3
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 81
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Modified on March 25, 2023

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