Analysis of I Deserve A Better Farewell
I hope you’d still call me one day,
When you mustered the courage to say the things you’ve been wanting to say.
I know you said nothing to talk about anymore,
I know you know we still have a whole lot more.
When the time comes,
I will know to listen and respect your boundaries.
I believe I deserve a better farewell.
I pray that one day, we’ll still have to see each other
To disconnect from everything that happened
Or to connect and maybe start all over.
I hope that one day,
you’ll realize how much I care and love you.
I wish you’ll pour out and release every pain,
every anguish your heart has been feeling.
I hope you disentangle from the waves of yesterday,
Rejuvenate and embrace the present
And enable all the senses for the sizzling tomorrows.
Scheme | AABBCDEFGFAHIJAKL |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11111111 11100101101111011 111110110101 11111110111 1011 1111100011100 1011010101 1111111111110 1001110110 11010101110 11111 1101111011 111110011001 10010111110 111010101110 010001010 001010101010001 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 771 |
Words | 155 |
Sentences | 9 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 17 |
Lines Amount | 17 |
Letters per line (avg) | 35 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 594 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 142 |
About this poem
Excerpt from my poem, “This is my Goodbye”
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Written on 2003
Submitted by Wildflower888 on March 21, 2023
Modified by Wildflower888 on October 16, 2023
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