Analysis of I Deserve A Better Farewell



I hope you’d still call me one day,
When you mustered the courage to say the things you’ve been wanting to say.
I know you said nothing to talk about anymore,
I know you know we still have a whole lot more.
When the time comes,
I will know to listen and respect your boundaries.
I believe I deserve a better farewell.  
I pray that one day, we’ll still have to see each other
To disconnect from everything that happened
Or to connect and maybe start all over.
I hope that one day,
you’ll realize how much I care and love you.
I wish you’ll pour out and  release every pain,
every anguish your heart has been feeling.
I hope you disentangle from the waves of yesterday,
Rejuvenate and embrace the present
And enable all the senses for the sizzling tomorrows.


Scheme AABBCDEFGFAHIJAKL
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111 11100101101111011 111110110101 11111110111 1011 1111100011100 1011010101 1111111111110 1001110110 11010101110 11111 1101111011 111110011001 10010111110 111010101110 010001010 001010101010001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 771
Words 155
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 594
Words per stanza (avg) 142

About this poem

Excerpt from my poem, “This is my Goodbye”

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Written on 2003

Submitted by Wildflower888 on March 21, 2023

Modified by Wildflower888 on October 16, 2023

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