Analysis of Sealed With A Goodbye



Sealed with a goodbye, my innocence shattered,
The pure goddess within, forever battered.
The little boy in my heart, once alive and free,
Now dead, replaced by a man of cruelty.

Her absence left a void, a blackened hole,
My spirit broken, my once kind heart cold.
Darkness consumed me, as I embraced the pain,
A monster unleashed, with nothing left to gain.

Oh, how I mourn the loss of that young soul,
And curse the day she bid me farewell, taking her toll.
Sealed with a goodbye, my fate was sealed,
A tragic end to a love that never healed.


Scheme AABB CXDD CCEE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 1101110010 01100101010 010101110101 111101110 0101010101 1101011111 10011110101 01001110111 1111011111 010111111001 11011111 01011011101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 546
Words 114
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 140
Words per stanza (avg) 34

About this poem

This poem is about the aftermath of a lost love that has shattered a man.

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Written on March 20, 2023

Submitted by brejesh.shan on March 20, 2023

Modified on March 24, 2023

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Brejesh Umashankar

Brejesh Umashankar is a contemporary Indian poet, known for his powerful and evocative poetry that delves into the complexities of the human experience. His work is characterized by its rich imagery, evocative language, and deep exploration of themes such as love, heartbreak, pain, suffering, strength, comedy and identity. He uses his poetry as a medium to express his innermost thoughts and emotions, drawing inspiration from his personal experiences and observations of the world around him. His poetry is known for its powerful imagery, and its ability to evoke strong emotions in the reader. more…

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