Analysis of Where do I start



I asked, where do I start…
How do I go on with such a huge hole in my heart.
I sat down and thought, how do I make things better,
So I wrote myself a little letter.

As they say, the best horses go to heaven with no tail,
Every owner will have a weep and a wail.
But knowing you gave them the very best home,
And all the memories in your head, so tightly sewn.

Have peace from knowing you took pride in their care,
The love, the trust… nothing can compare.
Knowing they were the very best of the best,
But now the time has come, so sadly, to rest.

It doesn’t stop here, their wings have been gained,
Despite the fact we are so very pained.
They gallop away as free as can be,
Trust me, one day, you shall see.

So when you think you are saying goodbye,
And you sit back, letting out a big sigh.
Remember it is only goodbye for now
However You may be thinking, well… how?

One day you will meet again
And pick back up the leather rein
You will gallop away so far and so free,
Possibly along the coast in front of the sea.

So when you think, where do I start,
Remember they still have the place in your heart.
They never really leave, always your best friend,
So please don’t forget… this isn’t the end.


Scheme AABB CCXX DDEE FFGG HHII XXGG AAJJ
Poetic Form Quatrain  (71%)
Metre 111111 1111111011011 111011111110 111101010 11101101110111 100101101001 11011101011 0101000111101 11110111011 010110101 10100101101 11011111011 111111111 0101111101 1100111111 1111111 111111101 0111101011 0101110111 101111011 1111101 01110101 11100111011 100010101101 11111111 01011101011 1101011111 111011101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,245
Words 272
Sentences 14
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 131
Words per stanza (avg) 34

About this poem

I am a huge horse lover. On the 17th January 2023 I found my pony of 8 years had passed unexpectedly. So as I laid awake at 11pm one night, I decided to write a little poem to help me and others in the same/who have been in the same situation as myself, as like me, it breaks you into a million pieces. I find a little comfort from the words I wrote.

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Written on February 07, 2023

Submitted by annastepho11 on February 08, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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