Analysis of Surrender



A time to surrender
Step back
Retreat,
Revaluate,
Recharge.

Then leap over the mountains,
Penetrate those walls,
Navigate the vast oceans,
Race across the lands,
Soar above the clouds.

Surrender,
Heal,
Pause,
Reset,
Rebuild,
Refresh.

Then blast off to space,
Conquer the universe,
Capture a star,
Swirl a milky way,
And never look back.


Scheme ABCCX DXDXX AXXXXX XXXXB
Poetic Form
Metre 011010 11 01 1 01 1110010 1011 100110 10101 10101 010 1 1 01 01 01 11111 10010 1001 10101 01011
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 339
Words 75
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 6, 5
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 66
Words per stanza (avg) 14

About this poem

The word "Surrender." has a bad reputation and a negative meaning. In this poem I express that sometimes to surrender is actually to win.

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Written on November 21, 2021

Submitted by Dgrigorian on February 10, 2023

Modified on April 04, 2023

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David Grigorian

David was born Deaf in Armenia. He lived in Ukraine, Japan, and USA. He not only a writer but an artist. His paintings and poems have been published online and newsletters. more…

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