Analysis of One

Gloriana Smith 1973 (Portland,Or)



Met you alone
One afternoon
Heard on your lips
A forgotten tune

Knew you from
Somewhere outside of time
Hands that color
Outside of the lines

Lost in a moment
Deep in your eyes
The curve of your mouth
Your hands on my thighs

Then quiet and still
Too perfect to move
Breathing in
The smell of you

Tracing a memory
To keep and rewind
Until once more
We are intertwined


Scheme XAXA XXXX XBXB XXXX XCXC
Poetic Form Quatrain  (60%)
Tetractys  (50%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 1101 101 1111 00101 111 11111 1110 11101 10010 1011 01111 11111 11001 10111 100 0111 100100 11010 0111 11001
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 373
Words 78
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 59
Words per stanza (avg) 14

About this poem

That first sacred moment in time, when two become one.

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Submitted by on February 07, 2023

Modified on March 28, 2023

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Gloriana Smith

I’ve been writing poetry my entire life. It’s my therapy. My thoughts have to have this outlet. I also write songs. more…

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