Analysis of My white night cup



My white night cup.

Some read ,some pray.
Some count the stars.
All alone in the dark.
 i hold my white cup tight.
Offers me company each night.
So magic is the coffee savour.
Though it is not costly indeed.
Eases my loneliness and pains.
White cup ,never go away!
Night is so long,stay by my side! keep staying up by me.
Every time I taste your coffee.
Again and again,tell you true words
The story of my life that never ends
Clourful and gloomy days.
Sorrow and joy inside my heart.
I trust you and for ever.
 And you don't want me feel sad .
 You give me hope and power.
 To keep fighting in silence.
That is a true story I live.
With a little cup,that's fool.
Every night I do declare.
The deepest secrets no one knows.
 She knows my sighs and smiles.
Opens my sleepy eyes to see clear
 She affords patience and light.
 To go on  the long  fight.
 Welcome a happy morning.
 And leave my troubles behind.


Scheme X AXXBBAXXACCXXXXDXDXXXXXXXBBXX
Poetic Form Etheree  (23%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1111 1111 1101 101001 111111 10110011 11010101 11111001 10110001 1110101 1111111110111 100111110 0101111 0101111101 10101 10010111 1110110 0111111 1111010 1110010 11011011 101011 10011101 01010111 111101 101101111 1011001 111011 1001010 0111001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 908
Words 202
Sentences 28
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 29
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 345
Words per stanza (avg) 88

About this poem

A poem that reflects the sleepless nights and their impact on my mood and physical state too

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Written on February 12, 2023

Submitted by Poete213 on February 11, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Abdellatif Belmekki

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