Analysis of Mamba: (The Bright Eyed) An Aboriginal Reminiscence

George Gordon McCrae 1833 (Leith) – 1927



The day had fled, the moon arose,
Night straight began with evening's close--
A night whose calm and silvery sheen
Befitted well the wild yapeen.1
Within the circle of the camp
Blazed the clear fire, while measured tramp
Of dancing warriors shook the ground,
To song and time-sticks' throbbing sound.
There twice two hundred feet advanced,
There twice a hundred malkas2 glanced
Bright in the moon, that silvered o'er
The arms that all those malkas bore.
Wild the device, and strange the sign
That stared in many a snowy line
From beaming face and heaving breast,
And limbs that seldom paused to rest;
Whilst all the rib-like lines laid on,
Made each man seem a skeleton.
Nodded the feathers from the red
And netted band that bound each head,
And hoarsely rustling leaves of trees
Shook round dark ankles in the breeze.
The singers with their time-sticks rang
The cadence of the song they sang;
And every face and limb below,
And tree above them, caught the glow
That spread from camp-fire's rising blaze,
Lighting the yapeen's wond'rous maze
Of feet and ankles in the dance
With fitful gleam or twinkling glance.

Conspicuous 'mid the dancing crowd,
Whose ranks alternate swayed and bowed,
Shone Mamba, tricked with wild design,
And symbol traced in waving line.
No limbs more active wore the green
At yon great Ghim-boboke3 yapeen;
And no two arms more graceful there
In circling motion cleft the air
Than his--and his the eagle-eye
Inspiring all the minstrelsy.
The young and old in groups around
Drank in the sight, the joy, the sound;
And Mamba's form throughout the dance
Attraced every wondering glance.


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Poetic Form
Metre 01110101 11011101 011101001 11011 01010101 101101101 110100101 11011101 11110101 1101011 10011110 0111111 10010101 110100101 11010101 01110111 11011111 11110100 10010101 01011111 0110111 11110001 01011111 01010111 010010101 01011101 111110101 100111 11010001 110111001 010010101 11100101 11011101 01010101 11110101 111111 01111101 010010101 11010101 010101 01010101 10010101 0110101 11001001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,638
Words 281
Sentences 12
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 30, 14
Lines Amount 44
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 643
Words per stanza (avg) 137
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 23, 2023

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