Analysis of En.do.me.tri.ose

Deslin 1986 (Hanoverpark)



Lank gelede was daar n meisiekind
Op skool was sy n maergesig kind
Nooit sou sy kon weet
Dat siekte haar lewe eet

Dokter in dokter uit
Sy se hom se my reguit
Dokter se meisie endometriose....
Sy se dokter is dit die narkose

Vandag lei sy aan die grootnaam siek endometriose
Maar sy se als het n doel dis nie vir die ruggraadlose
Deslin is haar naam
Eendekuil die plek se naam

Sys n vegter
God is haar regter
Hy gee haar die krag
Sy weet God het alle mag.

Gedig deur Deslin 22/02/23


Scheme AAAA AABB BBCC DDEE X
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 1111111 11111 11111 1011 111111 1111 1111111 11111111 111111111111 1111 11111 111 1111 11111 111111 111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 487
Words 103
Sentences 3
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 76
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

A young girl who never knew she would suffer from this disease but Believe in Gods help

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Written on February 22, 2023

Submitted by desmfortuin on February 22, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Deslin

Deslin is a 37 year mother of 2 and 1 forster son her sisters. Married to a loving man. Suffer from endometriosis since young age diagnosed 2007. Had 4 operations already. Shes a small town girl a plattelandse dorpie Eendekuil. more…

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